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Spike's Tickle Attack: Twilight Sparkle

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Narrator: one day in the town of Ponyville we see the little baby-dragon Spike, as he is trying to make a 6-gem cake, he had all of the ingredients all he needs is to add the 6-jewels, he walks into the cabinet and see the 6-jewels he got for cooking the cake were gone and Twilight left him a note in the cabinet saying

"Dear Spike,

            Me and the rest of my friends need your jewels, I hope you don't mind that we took them, we own you 6 jewels - Twilight Sparkle"

Spike: It took me so long to get those valuable jewels, and those are the 6 tastiest jewels ever, I am not just going to let them steal them, I am going to get them back

(as he runs out of the kitchen to try to get the jewels he saw Twilight and the gang out the window as he was running, he stopped and Twilight said)

Twilight: Bye girls, I will see you later I need to get the jewel I hidden in the house

Pinkie Pie: But ain't Spike in there

Twilight: Yes, but I hide it in someplace I'm sure he won't find it, if I be quick and sneaky I can get it before he sees it,

AppleJack: well I hope you are cause we really need those jewels

Twilight: I know I mean a really expensive item like that doesn't always come, we really need to buy it

(Spike looked surprised on what his friends said)

Spike: I thought they were my friends, but they took my gems just to buy something for themselves, well I am not going to let it happen I am going to get those jewels back!

(as he hears the door open he went into Twilight's room waiting for her)

(Twilight walks into the house,enters her room and talks to Spike)

Twilight: Oh, hey Spike

Spike: I heard you took my jewels, I want to know where they are

Twilight: oh Sorry Spike, but me and my friends need those jewels

Spike: for what?

Twilight: I'm sorry I can't tell you, it is for something me and my friends need

Spike: But do you know what I want with those 6 jewels

Twilight: what?

Spike: well I wanted to (burps in Twilight face and the stink from his mouth knocks her out) Ha, good thing I didn't brush my teeth this morning, now I will know where those jewels are

(a half-hour later Twilight sees she is tied up in her bed with all 4 of her legs tied at each end and her wings are tied up too)

Twilight: Spike what are you doing?

Spike: I wanted to know where my 6 jewels are, and I'm not going to untie you until to tell me

Twilight: just in case you don't know I am an Alicorn, so I Can use magic to break free (Twilight tries to use her magic to try to break free but fails)
what? why can't I break free

Spike: well, remember when Zecora gave us some unwanted stuff

Twilight: Yes.

Spike: well, remember when she gave us a box full of magic-resistant items?

Twilight: yes.

Spike: well one of those things in the box is this magic-resisting rope, unable for you to break out, in fact I forgot one more thing (uses a tiny bit of the rope and ties it on Twilight's horn) now you won't be able to use any magic at-all and I can torture you all I want, until you tell me where you put my jewels

Twilight: Spike for the last time, I can't tell you were your jewels are

Spike: Fine have it your way (grabs out a feather he uses to write down letters as it scares Twilight knowing what he is going to do

Twilight: No.... no Spike please don't do this!

Spike: well, you won't tell me where my jewels are so... (stokes the feather up and down Twilight's stomach)

(Twilight breaks out laughing)

Ha ha...... no.... stop..... hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!
O my gosh, my stomach....... hahahahahahaha!

(this continues for 10 minutes)


Spike: Will you tell me where my jewels are

Tiwlight: No! I can't never!

Spike: Oh well I guess we will have to go somewhere different (he pulls out another feather, and uses it on both of her sides)

Twilight: NO! NO! No! AH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OH SWEET CELESTIA STOP IT.... (Twilight screams really loud ) STOP IT! STOP IT! STOP IT! AH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

(This continues for 15 minutes)

Spike: Ok I will stop Twilight

Twilight: (Trying to catch her breath while saying) oh.... really...... thanks

Spike: on your sides at least, there is just one more part I need to do (Spike jumps off the bed and goes on the end of her bed near her hooves)

Twilight: Spike, please don't those are more ticklish than my sides

Spike: Really, I had no idea, this time I will show you no mercy (he put an evil grin on his face as he rapidly strokes the feathers on her hoofs)

Twilight: AH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! O MY GOSH, STOP IT YOU'RE MAKING ME LAUGH TEARS, AH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! O MY GOSH SPIKE PLEASE STOOOOOOOOOOOPPPPPPP, AH, PLEAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE

Note from me: Ya, I bet you didn't know Twilight is this ticklish, back to story

(this continues on for 20 minutes)

Spike: (stops) well, I do need my jewels where are they

Twilight: I can't tell you, (still laughing even though he ain't tickling her)

Spike: grrrr (is about to tickle her as someone knocks at the door

(Twilight couldn't hear the knocking over her own laughter so Spike decided to check who it is, he open the front door, seeing AppleJack is there and quickly closes the door so AppleJack can't hear Twilight laugh

AppleJack: Hey Spike, isn't Twilight home

Spike: No sorry, and I don't know where she went

AppleJack: oh, well I guess I will come here later, but I need to go somewhere and I want to know if you would watch Winona for me please

(Spike then thought for a minute and advise a plan where he can use Winona)

Spike: sure, (takes winona's leash)

AppleJack: Thanks, make sure she eats a lot of honey

Spike: why?

AppleJack: Honey is her favorite food, she would lick it off of anything!

Spike: O ok, good to know, see ya later then

AppleJack: Bye Spike

(Spike went back in, knowing he is going to make Twilight crack this time, he grabs some honey out of the fridge and went back to Twilight's room where she is still laughing)

(Spike then drops some honey on Twilight's hooves, Twilight then noticed it and finally stopped laughing)

Twilight: Spike, what are you doing?

Spike: well guess who AppleJack left me with (lifts up Winona for Twilight to see)

Twilight: Winona?

Spike: Yes, and now (Puts winona on Twilights bed)

(Winona smelled the honey on Twilight's hooves, and started licking them up)

Twilight: Oh, no......... AH! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO AH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA O MY GOSH THIS IS EVEN WORSE! AH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THIS IS TOO MUCH!! AH AHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA SOMEPONY, ANYPONY, HELP ME PLEASE!!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

(this continues only for 5 minutes cause Twilight is really being tickled on this point)

(Twilight finally breaks and says)

Twilight: OK! OK! THERE IS A JEWEL RIGHT BEHIND MY ROTATING MIRROR

(Spike lifted up her mirror and see a jewel wrapped in napkins, so nothing dirty will get on it)

spike: where are the other 5?>

Twilight: MY FRIENDS HAVE THEM EACH OF THEM HAS 1 EACH!

Spike: OK Winona, stop!

(Winona stops as Twilight passed out on her bed)

Spike: well it looks like I have a lot of work to do if I want all of those 6 gems back, I have 1, 5 to go!

and come on Winona,you are going to help me with this (he grabs, Winona on her leash, the bottle of Honey, the magic-resisting rope, the feathers, and the jewel)

(He put all of them except for Winona in a back-pack, left the house and goes to the next pony)

well now I guess I should get a jewel from  ___________________


(who should Spike get next?, You Decide!)

and how was this story, should I make more in this series?
Spike wanted to make a 6-gem cake but her heard his 6 main friends took them, so he decided to make a tickle attack on all of them

if people like this enough I will make more in this series

- I do not own My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic, credit goes to Hasbro and The Hub
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Could I continue this series?